Untold Card Submissions

Card type: Race
Card Name: L'na Dawn: Aquarius
Swap type: story
Cost: 5 UP
Level: NA
Body Attributes: NA
Mind Attributes: 2 ATK/ 1 DEF/ 2 Boost
Soul Attributes: 2 ATK/ 2 DEF/ 1 Boost
Action: Standard
Duration: Instant
Range: Touch
Game Information: For every 1 body boost add 2 to MAG. IP: Slap: Damage: To hit roll body ATK to body DEF
Magnitude: 1
Flavor Text: Aqua Sapiens are a little known species of L'na Dawn, as they can hide into the waters when strangers are near. They tend to stay near water, as it gives them strength. Avg Height/Weight 6'1/120lb
Flavor Quote: "No, i'm sorry but giving me the torch is a bad idea."

All Race Cards are Story Swaps. You can find out more about Swap Types here: http://www.untoldthegame.com/primer/creating-character

Also, we'd use your art as concept art and get new art for the actual card, if we create these guys. ;)

Because I really want this card to base a character around, and artwork shouldn't be difficult to find.

Card Type: Race
Card Name: [North American] Wolfman (working title. If you can think of a cooler name, let me know)
Swap Type: Story
Cost: 6
Level: (if applicable)
Body Attributes: 1/2/2
Mind Attributes: N/A
Soul Attributes: N/A
Action: Standard
Duration: Instant
Range: Touch
Game Information: For every 1 Body Boost add 2 to MAG. IP: Claws: Damaging, To Hit Roll Body ATK vs Body DEF.
Magnitude: 1
Flavor Text: Genetically altered warriors of North America, the Wolfmen are feared by Churl and Highbred alike. Average height/weight: 8 ft/ 800lbs
Flavor Quote: The Wolfmen tirelessly hunt any Externals or Undead who venture into their territory. It's a shame they also tirelessly hunt any Churl or Highbreds as well. -NAU Veteran

Nice job, Ben! :D

Card Type: Power
Card Name: Indomitable Spirit 1 / 2
Swap Type: Story
Cost: 3 UP / 8 UP
Level: 6 / 16
Body Attributes: + * Boost
Mind Attributes: + * Boost
Soul Attributes: + * Boost
Action: Free
Duration: Inherent
Range: Personal
Game Information: (This power is a double card.)
(1) The magnitude of this power is two times the number of Bane cards currently affecting your character.
(2) The magnitude of this power is six times the number of Bane cards currently affecting your character.
Magnitude: *
Flavor Text: You have a knack for overcoming adversity. / You regularly wrest victory from the jaws of defeat.
Flavor Quote: "Dolt, you'll have to do much better than that to defeat me." - Churl Valkyrie to desperate High Bred that just threw sand in her eyes

Hurm.... :)

Card Type: Power
Card Name: Fighters Spirit
Swap Type: story
Cost:4UP/8UP
Level: 2 / 4
Body Attributes: (if applicable)
Mind Attributes: (if applicable)
Soul Attributes: (if applicable)
Action: Free
Duration: inherent
Range: personal
Game Information: When the players UP drops bellow 1/4 their total UP add Mag to your swap buffer
Magnitude: 8UP/16UP
Flavor Text: Your body is broken, Your mind is rinded, and soul is suppressed... Your enemies should run now. / He who laughs last probably killed everyone else.
Flavor Quote: "It's nearly dead! Charge!!!" Final words of NAU 1st lieutenant Anderson.

It's hard to make a cliche rage power interesting but I haven't seen one in a deck yet so I thought i'd post this!

Groovy - thanks, Stigs! :) We do have some rage Power Cards (you may remember Ursimion played them often in playtest) but nothing along these lines - we'll look into it! :D

Card Type: Power
Card Name: Pandora's Dice
Swap Type: Time
Cost: 25
Level: 10
Body Attributes: (if applicable)
Mind Attributes: (if applicable)
Soul Attributes: (if applicable)
Action: standard
Duration: Instant
Range:medium
Game Information: Area of Effect: Circle [10xMag ft] Everyone in the area must make an Overcome (Soul) (vs. MAG) those that fail roll a d20 to determine their fate, (1-4) Demented, (5-8) Staggered, (9-12) Insane, (13-16) Deaf, (17-20) Blind
Magnitude: 11 + Soul/2
Flavor Text: You roll the dice of fate, and hope karma doesn't hold grudges.
Flavor Quote: "Yahtzee!!!" the last thing you'll ever hear.

I like everything but the flavor text...

Yeah lol. I was a bit loopy from lack of sleep and just put some stuff down for laughs. I got a kick out of it at the time but feel free to change it. :P

Pah - you lightweight! I'm still going strong on 3 hours! :P

Yeah but your loopy all the time so your used to it. :D

Scientists theorize that the creature known as "Ashy" does not actually sleep. That instead, he somehow has solar converters that allow him to absorb energy through sunlight and allows him to continue functioning throughout the night. However, there is the possible side effect of insanity...

As a suggestion to the flavor text, how about: "Shall we play a game?" or "Never tempt Fate"

I like it! but howzy bout. "There are times when you have to temp fate!" ? or "those that try to pluck the cords of fate often only tangle them."

I've been thinking about a whole string of power cards that focus primarily on luck and chance and always cause some sort of chaos. I think it may be fun to play a bit of a gambler character. Feel free to take the idea and run with it if you like it.

Cool, Ben! Can I be a card? I think we should have a contest for someone to create the coolest "Ashy" card for Untold... :P

Stigs, you may want to get your mitts on Gifts of Marou - lotsa those kinda Powers in there. :D

IP: Unrivaled promoting:Mind ATK vs Mind DEF subject failing must succeed an overcome roll to fight the condition(Must buy UNTOLD) and ya know with the Mind boost on the card being like 5 and the Mag of the card giving 2 MAG for every Mind Boost... yeah he's pretty unstoppable.

"Will drive 24 hours for a CUBE where you WILL buy Untold."

...Awesome!

What do you guys think about a Critical hits and fumbles deck?...

Hall asked:
What do you guys think about a Critical hits and fumbles deck?...

If you combine it with ManyHattedMan's "Oops" deck idea (http://www.untoldthegame.com/forum/yes-concept), I think it would be great!

Card Type: Power
Card Name: Roll dem bones! 1 / 2 / 3 / 4
Swap Type: Hot Swap
Cost: 3 UP / 5 UP / 7 UP / 9 UP
Level: 6 / 10 / 14 / 18
Body Attributes: N/A
Mind Attributes: N/A
Soul Attributes: N/A
Action: Free
Duration: Instant
Range: Personal
Game Information: When your attack hits an opponent, roll 1d4 and add that result to the MAG of your current attack. You may exceed maximum MAG for that attack. (This is level 1 version - levels 2-4 use d6, d8 and d10 respectively.)
Magnitude: *
Flavor Text: Luck only lasts a lifetime if you die young.
Flavor Quote: Are ya feelin' lucky, punk? Well, ARE YA?

(Not entirely my idea - I was inspired by the hue and cry for random damage.)

The ONLY thing I don't like about it is that it requires other die. Untold advertises that the only die you need is a d20...

True, I like the simplicity of all d20 mechanics myself. However, if you bring your own cards and this is one of them, then you'd probably be sure to bring your dice, right? ;)

Untold advertises that the ONLY die needed is a d20. While its an interesting card, I would modify it to fit a d20 mechanic, if nothing else, than to keep it true to the game's original design.

Card Type: Power
Card Name: Deadly Accurate (i hate the name..anyone got better?)
Swap Type: Story
Cost:5/10/15/20
Level: 5/10/15/20
Body Attributes:
Mind Attributes:
Soul Attributes:
Action: Free
Duration: Inherent
Range: Personal
Game Information: roll a d20. If the result is equal to or less than 5 add the result to your 'to hit' roll. (

10, 15, then 20 for the other levels)
Magnitude: (if applicable)
Flavor Text: You strike your target with unerring precision
Flavor Quote: I never miss (ill come up with a better quote later..im tired)

btw im not sure about the costs or levels what would be a good way to figure that out?

this was supposed to be attached to above, but nothing i do seems to let it show

I've kinda been trying to estimate how much UP abilities of different MAG would cost. I like changing levels to include more of the d20 as the level increased, but this is the math on the d20 rolls:

Counting 1-5 and ignoring everything above that: average value is 0.75
Counting 1-10 and ignoring everything above that: average value is 2.75
Counting 1-15 and ignoring everything above that: average value is 6.00
Counting 1-20: average value is 10.50

Those are the results you could expect to add to MAG randomly.

EDIT: Rereading I realize you're talking about to hit rolls (I'm tired too). Call it "Unerring Accuracy" maybe. But this would work for damage too.

From this point forward - please do not worry about providing UP cost - and I've removed it from Ashy's post. As the WM, we will have to decide this based upon the system we have built for Untold.

We love your submissions - keep them coming! Let us worry about what things cost!

Thanks!

Thank you. I love thinking about card concepts but I always worry, "Is this too cheap to be game-breaking? Or is it too expensive that nobody would ever play it?"

Card Type: Power
Card Name: Tactical Prowess
Swap Type: Story
Level: 8/15
Body Attributes: 0/0/1
Mind Attributes: 0/0/1
Soul Attributes:
Action: Free
Duration: Inherent
Range: Personal
Game Information: Lvl.8 - Choose one of the following: When making an attack, you may roll a d20 twice. You may take the highest roll for your attack OR Choose another member of the party. When they make an attack role, they roll a d20 twice and take the highest roll as their attack OR You may choose to add the MAG of this card to your attack roll. Limit: This ability may only be used once per encounter.
Lvl. 15 - Choose one of the following: When making an attack, you may roll a d20 three times. You may take the highest roll for you attack OR Choose another member of the party. When they make an attack role, they roll a d20 three times and take the highest roll as their attack OR You may choose to add the MAG of this card to your attack roll. Limit: This ability may only be used twice per encounter.
Magnitude: 4/7
Flavor Text: You are a brilliant and cunning tactician.
Flavor Quote: "Wait! I have a better idea!"