Fiction Fridays - Shadows of the Mind, Part 1

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So...what's Fiction Friday?!? Basically, every Friday on Untoldthegame.com we'll be bringing you some awesome fiction based on our new game and it's open Campaign Setting, Splintered Serenity. We hope that the fiction amazes, entertains, and interests you; and we hope that it makes you want to step into our world: one of dizzying opportunity and utterly unlimited potential for adventure, stories, and drama that forms the core of Untold's amazing gaming system.

Please let us know what you think by posting a comment, or dropping us a line in our forum! We're looking for more fan-submitted fiction, so feel free to let us know that you're interested! And remember - don't let your story go Untold!


Shadows of the Mind


by

Ben Lee


"Powers are converging..."

Shadow snapped awake, snarling and biting at some unknown enemy. It took a few moments for him to realize that he had been dreaming, but he still wasn't sure he was alone. In fact, in this odd, hard, shiny, tube like cave, he often felt like he wasn't alone. There were...things...spirits here, all around him, just out of sight. Entities, mournful ones; something tragic had befallen them. Another growl could be heard disturbed his contemplations, echoing off the hard surfaces of the cave. Shadow crouched down into a pounce, preparing to "veil" himself when he realized that the sound was his stomach. Once aware of it, the hunger took precedence over everything else. He was safe, it had only been a dream; and if the spirits haunting this cave tried to threaten him, well, he had more than enough ways of dealing with them. (more...)

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Stimpy, could you do some

Stimpy, could you do some editing for me? In sentence 6 between be and disturbed should be the word "heard". Sorry I missed that in the original.

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All taken care of. Let me

All taken care of. Let me know if there is anything else.

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Doesn't look that way, thanks

Doesn't look that way, thanks alot man!