Cards: Skills & Traits Minor Typos

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I'm finally getting the chance to really sit down and go through the cards slowly. I started with the Skills and Traits Powers. I didn't find anything that was a mechanical error (that all looks great!), but I did pick up on some typos (I should have been an editor, shoulda, woulda, coulda...).

All of the typos are in the descriptive text. If it's part of the italicized text, I put "(Ital.)" in front:

Concentration 3: (Ital.) "Breath" should be "Breathe"

Intimidating 4: "and a many larger opponents" should be "and many larger opponents"

Smart 5: (Ital.) "only ask to right question" should be "only ask the right question"

Strong: "Your brawny and capable of lifting an impressive ammount" should be
"You're brawny and capable of lifting an impressive amount"

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Thanks!

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