Cards: Combat Focused Typos

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I found some more typos while going through my cards.

"Burst of Speed 1 & 2": Doesn't list how long the penalty lasts. (If it is like Accelerated Evasion, then the penalty should last 5 rounds.)

"Grapple": For every 1 Body Boost add 1 to MAGI. Should be "MAG."

"Honed Weapon Master 2": Has redundant requirements (the first listed requirement is adequate).

"Last Reserve": In Descriptive text: "...you are able to tap into reserve..." should be "...you are able to tap into a reserve..." (or perhaps "your" instead.)

"Quick Response 3": Descriptive text: "Few can beat you of the line," should be "Few can beat you off the line,"

"Ready to Defend 2": Italicized text: "There is no honor in dying with magic." should be "There is no honor in dying by magic."

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Thanks!

Thanks, Timelord! +10 UP!!

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Burst of Speed

You're welcome Ashy!

Am I correct that the penalty for Burst of Speed lasts 5 rounds?

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I believe so...

I believe so, I'll check and let ya know! :D

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Correct - the penalty for

Correct - the penalty for burst of speed does last for 5 rounds. Thanks for the catch!

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Missed it the first time

You're very welcome!

BTW: When I was correcting my card, I caught another typo on the "Burst of Speed" card that I missed the first time around.

The penalty effect in parenthesis: "15 ft a round / 9 mph" the "9 mph" should be "1 mph" like the reverse of the card. Sorry I didn't catch it the first time around!